Thursday, September 24, 2009

Write Poetry all you Want, Michael Bay has his Finger on the Pulse

Write Poetry all you Want, Michael Bay has his Finger on the Pulse

   The last act makes a film. Wow them in the end, and you got a hit.

Robert McKee from Charlie Kaufman’s Screenplay “Adaptation”

I scream, 

“Get the in car! 

We don’t have time for your stuff.”

[Pan Right]

As you run and hurl your agile twenty-four year old body 

slow 

motion 

style

into the passenger seat of my silver Toyota

[Cut To]

Everything else is a montage of squealing tires and stick-shifting and 

gas-pedaling

all the way to the California border

[Long Shot- Helicopter]

In the last ten miles the cops take up the chase 

(for building dramatic effect)

They chase the car like a kite tail

but they are to late and they know it

I play some obscure retro-seventies funk on the radio in the style of Tarintino

(which is to say, in the style of someone he stole from)

as you fire clip after clip 

out the back window to keep the sirens at a distance

And as we barrel over the state line into Oregon

The real California 

from San Diego to Yreka

sinks into the pacific ocean

like the Red Sea from the Ten Commandments

but it is real this time 

the real mother fucking California

no blue screen, no model, no CGI

The end, roll credits

house light come up

And you and I

we made it

and must begin out lives now as refugees

Epilogue 

The nation commemorates this day of tragedy

when the ocean was stopped the mountains of the Sierra Nevada 

the death toll was just shy of 37 million people

Bombay India is now the movie capital of world

China’s Hefei city became the new Silicon valley

Oliver Stone did a movie

Unfortunately he was out of town at the time

and I was played by Daniel Craig 

and you

      Halle Berry

I got a job for a while at a coffee house in Eugene 

and you worked at a bowling alley

until you got excepted to Grad school in Denver

and I got into Brown 1,954 miles east of you

and then we had to decide

how much of what we had risked together 

was worth

the sacrifice of keeping